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42"x48"x2" acrylic on canvas.

This is one of a set commissioned to hang in an office lobby.

Its partner piece, which will be hung facing it, can be seen here: [link]

In painting these, as is the case with all my work, the dominant intention was to go beyond myself. Achieving that goal while sitting in front of a blank canvas only occurs during the creative and un-manufactured moment itself. I have my history, my biases and preferences when it comes to color and subject matter, sure- but what I'm reaching for calls for me to go to the bottom of the well that contains those individuations and start digging.

It becomes apparent when gold is struck.

My thoughts as I worked on this drifted through and passed, as they tend to do, without my searching for separations or divisions....and my feelings gave life to those thoughts. What occurred to me before starting on these paintings, though, was that I continued to limit paintings to a single image and idea, and that there was no reason other than habit to do this, so I thought to combine elements of different landscapes in this particular digging expedition.

The joy of the creative experience- for me- is, beyond how well I'm combining elements, in the moment when I am both humbled by what I've found at the bottom of the well and deeply honored. I am thankful- because the magnificence that reveals itself in sunsets, smiles, and sometimes a work of art could not possibly belong to me and yet,- in my bones- I know who I am, who we are, why we're here, where we're going, where we're from, and that indeed, this is my very own universe.

In attempting to go beyond myself, I've merely rediscovered how truly vast I am and more importantly- how vast we all are.

Critiques


:iconpurplekecleon:
Oh my god. At first, when I saw this, I thought it was a silly digital image with a lot of dodge tool used. I wondered why it could even have been presented, wanting a critique. Then, when I clicked it and saw it was a painting, I was taken aback. Those are some amazingly intense colors for a painting. Looking at that, I can feel the energy explode from the canvas, as if it cannot be contained.

There are three distinct sections that I can see, the top, middle, and bottom sections. The upper section seems to be the brightest due to the usage of the most white there (I don't even really see white elsewhere). The bottom seems to be like the top, remove the white. The middle seems to be almost where I see the most energy, but it's a different type from the top or bottom sections... it's like the middle section has a type of exploding or popping thing going on there, and it looks very heated from all of those warm colors. That's insane how you accomplished that. I could say that maybe it's a bit hard to look at the top part, maybe if only due to how my computer shows me such bright colors. I can only imagine how this looks in real life! I also must ask, did you use a gloss medium on this at all? I'm just curious because I bet that would enhance the shine in certain parts without a doubt.

Now let's see... the only thing I can think of is that I am finding a really hard time focusing on the top section of the piece. I almost feel it isn't quite balanced properly due to the placement of the white in the middle to middle-right corners of the top section... almost that some white to the left, even if some speckles, would do some good in the top section as well.

I really like how it is split up like that though. It lets me look at each of the sections on their own and then look at the piece as a whole. I think that was a good decision in not overwhelming the viewer.

This is a crazy fantastic piece. I really admire people who can do abstract color paintings well, and I feel you have done well here.
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I like the bold choice in color. I think the same painting in pastels would have likely been a waste of canvas. I like how this painting (and many of the other paintings I viewed in your gallery) feel like the tension on top of a lake. Your painting gives the impression that a particularly hot summer sun is just about to set, but the night air will remain torrid, in spite of its absence. The lines are horizontal, which usually denotes tranquility, but that peace is shattered by the vivid color and the bold strokes you use. This is a very strong piece and that conjurs up quite an emotional story when pondered. It also reminds me of a Forrest Clemenger Bess painting, The Rain of Color [link]
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:iconxtinracicot:
Looks amazing! So many colours. Feels like a mix of water, clouds and maybe even mountains. Really great piece.
:iconaftertaster7:
Practically four feet by four feet! Kudos to you! :clap:

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I think of a sunset over a lake with hills in the background when I look at it. No clue what your intention was but its very relaxing. Good work.
:iconzaleth-chris:
It looks like a multicoloured lake with lots of ripples. It really calms you down when you look at it. I like it very much :D

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:iconmanagodess:
Wow, this looks amazing.
I rather randomly found this picture actually, but it caught my eye immediately.
There's so much you can interpret with this, it just makes it all the better.
Love it =)

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Wish I had something like this hanging on my wall; I can picture myself utterly lost midst the colour and chaos for hours... Although, this has an odd air of serenity about it, too.

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:iconuriad:
The vibrance... Unfortunately my monitor is only set for Millions of Colors... So I can not fully enjoy this piece.

If only to see it live. I would be dumbfounded. My perceptions would tingle with happiness to see such a sight. Like a picture of my old house, It would bring back memories.

This, would insert them.

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:iconmelasdesign:
OoOoOo Pure eye candy.

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:icongravenimagez:
Wow.. stunning piece. :clap:

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:iconkinglemon:
Nice one one

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